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Peter Scraps Art
This is something i did for my mate peter, it was just a random thing i did ages ago

his channel
www.youtube.com/channel/UCyiIP…
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:iconspinekicksy:
spinekicksy Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2017
I like your profile pic :)
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TheDubstepAddict Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hi
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shineytrooper Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hello?
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:iconthedubstepaddict:
TheDubstepAddict Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I came from yt. Kickass videos man.
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shineytrooper Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ah... ok
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AhsokaTano1611 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Thanks for the watch
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shineytrooper Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
np
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AhsokaTano1611 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
:)
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AhsokaTano1611 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
You have a cool gallery! Do you like the story?
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shineytrooper Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks and yeah its really good... i think in places it falls short because of your writing but you get better.

when it comes to writing i think you need to read a lot of books as it helps you understand creative
writing. a lot of books that help me are star wars ahsoka and dark disciples as well as others. you seem to use
a lot of repeated words and dont really use interesting language (might be useful to use a thesaurus)

when working with a pre made character like ahsoka (especially with ahsoka) i think you need to
understand them a little better and when you make her do something with her you need to look over it 
and and check if you could imagine ahsoka saying this or doing this

also with that point you have to read over your work and try and imagine if this is how normal people would
interact a lot of your interactions between characters felt forced or awkward and a lot of the time you need to
slow down because the story moves too fast

im sorry for turning this into a review lol i tend to over analyse things but i really enjoyed it
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